This book talk about a girl name Dorisa and her father they both was finding food for there family and they saw a ship filled with pirates and they mistake that Dorisa's father was the leader of the pirates and. They ask there father if they can have this space of the island to catch some food . But Dorisa's realize that the pirates wanted the side of the island to catch the the dolphins and kill them. When Dorisa said to the pirates to stop they refused when Dorisa went to her father and told him that the pirates are trying to kill the dolphins.
Analyze:I think the author trying to tell us that when ever you have an island and pirates ask you can they have this side of the island. Just say no because they might come and mess every thing you have that there so they mess every thing up
Sarina-
ReplyDeleteNice job. Please put quotation marks around book titles and also indicate what pages you read and how long you read for. Also, please look at your subject-verb agreement. "This book talk about a girl name Dorisa..." should be "This book talks about a girl named Dorisa..." Also, the last sentence in your summary paragraph should be two sentences or you should have some commas. I also don't fully understand your analysis paragraph, the sentences are kind of confusing. Please look at p. 40 and 41 in the WRITE! book.
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