Wednesday, April 13, 2011
Monday, May 10, 2010
Chapter 3 of "My Friend Gets Abused"
Hey its your girl Candy so yeah today is May.19,2010 and it was lunch and i ask every one my friend "Ayoo were Jeniffer at" and she said "Oh she in the office with her aunt and the rest of the whole 6th grade teachers" so i said "Oh okay it what ever" so i ask my friend Shadari to come with me to go and see Jeniffer in the office and than we walk in and i saw Jeniffer i told Shadari "Ayoo Shadari, Jeniffer look mad scared like she look like she's gonna cry right know" so than Shadari said "Oh well lets go cause her aunts getting out of the meeting" .Than we came the the lunch room and saw Jeniffer and we went to her and i saw her crying like she was really scared and than i ask Nicole "What happen with Jeniffer why is she crying?" she told me "She crying because they said that on Friday when we was getting wet you was you there Candy oh wait no you wasn't we when we was getting wet on Friday one said we was playing butty tag Jeniffer get home her "aunt" gonna hit her so
When i saw Jeniffer face i was crying with her to cause she was crying and when some one cry i mite cry with them and our other friend Ayanna was like to Jeniffer "If you run away Jeniffer then come to my house" and we told Jeniffer "No don't go just take the pain and if you run away they gonna do the same thing they did when you ran to my house" so she went home and she told one of the HCZ helper to her "aunt" and ask if Jeniffer can stay at the HCZ and her "aunt" said yes and when i left she was scared because when she get home she was gonna get hit.
Well today is today and Ayanna is like omg she is just funny she make us laugh but Jeniffer is like she don't like any dam teacher in FDA like they stay on her case so as Ayanna she don't none of them they always talking stuff she sick and tired of her teacher and that how Jeniffer get abused why her "aunt" Be hitting her ode and i hate when teacher be on y case and i don't like when they do that that get me pissed
What is Wong do you think she is gonna get in trouble be her "aunt"? Do you thinks eh should listen to Ayanna? Do you think that Jeniffer should do good so she don't get hit by her aunt?
Come answer this question...DO YOU?
Friday, April 30, 2010
"I Wish This Would Have Never Happen To Me"
The next morning I came home and my mother was hitting me with a pan and ask me "Where was you at all night get out the house I don't want you in here you stupid prostitute" and I was telling my mom "Mom no i was walking and Joel saw me toke me to his house and rape me and I was yelling and no one could here me mom please don't hit me". So I went to the doctor and I toke a pregnacy test and it was positive when my mom check the mail she fond the results and when i came into the door she hit me with the pan in my face and back so i didn't know what to do so i went and ran far away from home.
Is Alexis making a big mistake in her life? Do you think she gonna get hit by her mom? Do you think she gonna have that baby? Well what are you waiting for. Do you?
Chapter 2 Of "My Friend Gets Abused"
Hi it's me again Candy it's time for school now OH NO DRAMA COMES NOW when i got to school every 6th grader heard that i gave my friend Jeniffer lice that's why she didn't come to school on December 20,2009. I asked everyone in school "Who said i gave Jeniffer lice?" they all said "Jeniffer said you gave her lice and that's why shes not coming to school tomorrow". So i waited for Jeniffer to come back to school so i I got mad and i wanted to go home so bad like i wanted to die and kill myself.
They said to me "Oh well we hared from you friend Jeniffer you gave your friend lice and we wanna know if that's true" i said "No its not true i didn't give her lice because i don't remeber giving her anything i guess that why she wont be coming to school for that" and they all said "You lien to us because Jeniffer said your a liar and that you lie to every one you know what forget it because your small and a liar and we don't believe anything that comes out your mouth little girl"
So the next day No one bothered me any saying i gave her lice so i stayed quiet all day every day so no one said nothing to me . So every one was not saying any thing to me and we were not friends any more but that when we made up and i was so sad i didn't want to live any more.
When Jeniffer came back i gave her a hug and she told me her aunt hit her again and did every thing to her she called the cops and she went to the present and everything i felt so bad that my mom called the cops and said "Oh this little girl is getting hit again and she not liking it and if i keep her in my house its like if i am kidnapping her and i going to get in so much trouble" so Jeniffer came to my house crying saying if she can stay cause her aunt hit her and slap her all around and also she feel down the stairs and i felt bad she sleeted over and nothing happen but all over again with the cops coming to my house
Do you think that Jeniffer should at least call the cops? Do you think she making a big bubble also known as a big mistake? Should she wait until her mother get out of jail and tell her? Do you think that Jeniffer is going to ACS?
Tuesday, April 20, 2010
"My Friend gets abused"
Novel Pitch
Hi my name is Candy Torres. The novel I'm writing about is called "My Friend gets abused". This novel can be for parents, children and also teens who been throught this life and who are going thought this life now. The school I go to has Drama 24/7 everyday never stops. Well my friend name is Jeniffer Perez I love her a lot but when I met her i didn't like her until I got transferred to her class. Me and Jeniffer are very close friends one day Jeniffer and Nicole were sitting at the lunch table and I ask "What happen Jeniffer?'' and Nicole said "You can't know about it" and Jeniffer said " No let her know your not the only one that can know about what going through in my life". So Jeniffer told me what happen with what her aunt did to her. Jeniffer's aunt hit her with the broom and bit her on her finger and i was scared and Jeniffer was scared too. So Nicole said to Jeniffer "When you get home pack your stuff and when we go home from school your coming with me home" and Jeniffer said "okay"
I told her to come because she left her shoes in my house so we went to my house and it was late in the night and Jeniffer said "Candy I'm scared cause when i get home my aunt gonna hit me and do what she want to do with me like send me to ACS" so i said to her "You know what Jeniffer stay with me until my mom comes from work" and Jeniffer was scared.
So we waited and one of Jeniffer's aunt boyfriend called my house harassed me on the phone saying "Look little girl I'm kill you and try to rape you and is Jeniffer there?" and i said "no there is no Jeniffer here sorry Wrong number" and i hung up so Jeniffer was crying and i was crying when my mom came home i said "Mommy, Jeniffer's aunt boyfriend called harassed me on the phone" and my mom was talking to Jeniffer and she was crying to my mom saying "Ms.Peralta i want to stay here because I'm scared to go home"
Do you think that Jeniffer is making a big mistake in her life right now?. Do you think she is gonna go to ACS?. Do you think her aunts gonna find her?. Well do you?
Wednesday, March 17, 2010
Monday, March 8, 2010
Why Forgive
Topic#2: Forgiveness and Justice This chapter is about a man name David. David get separated from his own family.
The main idea of this book is about forgiveness. These two people Brenda and David has been told to forgive what these